Our class is learning to use expository writing to give facts, explain ideas, or provide directions. We are writing our own how-to pieces. Our drafts are being shared with our writing groups, and we hope that the members of our group will help us revise and edit our expository writing to make our ideas more clear to our readers. What are some tips you would give someone who wanted to write a great how-to expository piece?
November 16, 2007 at 2:44 pm
These are great writing!I am impressed. WOW! This class did a great job!
There were maybe some mistakes but they will be easy to fix!
Abbie
November 16, 2007 at 3:32 pm
WOW!!
It sounds like you students have had lots of wonderful adventures. I like the way your writing is improving. I can really tell that everyone is working very hard extending their writing.
November 16, 2007 at 3:40 pm
I’m unable to open the writings but just wanted Abbie to know that I tried, and Mimi and I are proud of her and her accomplishments!!!! Love, Papa
November 26, 2007 at 5:58 pm
Dear Julean,
I liked your how to but some of the sentenses do not make cents.
Love, Sarah
November 26, 2007 at 6:02 pm
I love all of the storys!Everybuddy did a great job.I love teach 21!
November 26, 2007 at 6:02 pm
Madison,
You had lots of great writings! I read all of yours.
Abbie
November 26, 2007 at 6:06 pm
Mimi and Papa Harper,
Thank You for that comment. I enjoyed my trip at your big yellow house.
Hope to see you again!
Love,
Abbie
November 26, 2007 at 6:08 pm
Abbie I think it was asome. I liked how you gave alot of details.
November 26, 2007 at 6:11 pm
High mitchell I really like your writing because it is a good begenning. It has a good ending to.
December 4, 2007 at 3:36 pm
It’s so nice to see some of the work you all have done. It really is impressive. You should be very proud of your work–and yourselves for learning such a wonderful skill.
December 5, 2007 at 7:26 pm
Abbie, I am so proud of your work! You are developing into a great writer. I can’t wait to read some of your friends’ writing, too. Mrs. Kelly is a fantastic teacher!
January 30, 2008 at 11:42 pm
Trent,
I am so proud of you. Your work is so interesting and informative.
I can’t wait to read your next story.
April 2, 2008 at 12:11 pm
Dear Mrs.Harper,
I would love for you to look at my friends’ work.
I love You!
Love,
Abbie
April 17, 2008 at 7:31 pm
Hi Abby,
I always enjoy reading the things you write, I still have the two stories you gave me last year, do you remember? Of all the expository papers you wrote, I have to say that my favorites were about the Cherokee Indians & How To Cook Deer Steak. I like to learn new things and that is what I did when I read your papers, I’ll look forward to others in the future. I know that you love to read & write and it really shows. I’m so proud of you, keep up the excellent work!